Not a bad start . . .
It needs a bit of work though. The melodies were a bit off beat, you should probably get them a little bit nicer sounding before using them. Also, it was a bit incomplete sounding, I don't think there was much of a bass there.
Other than that, I did enjoy listening to the melody, and I thought you did a nice job with making melodies that sounded good together. Keep working on it and I'm sure it'll turn out nicely.
Ok thank you, Samus aran lover :p
I'm gonna try to improve my skills with FL studio and my synchronization with the beat... But the programm is uneasy to master :/
Didn't like the ending
Overall, I really enjoyed it - an excellent melody.
I didn't like the ending though - it just sort of stopped. It was such a disappointing end for such a good song . . .
One of the best songs I've ever heard on Newgrounds.
I really liked the intro in particular, the melody had almost a sad side to it.
I know almost everyone has already complained about the 1:20 thing, but I'm going to again :P
I actually kind of liked it, but i should have been a little shorter, and instead of going right into the intro melody, it would have been nice if you made a seperate melody that went more into the sadder side of the intro (as the main theme seemed to go more to the happy side).
That was my original plan, to make another melody. But then there would be 4 melodies in the whole song which i thought would make it too crazy, As for shortening it, i was told to do that b4 i submitted and it completely slipped my mind and then kept going.
If you want me to change it for you PM and ill send it to you right away.
Thanks a lot for the awesome review!
it repeated too much at the beginning, but overall it was pretty good. An actual ending instead of just fading out would have been nice though.
Didn't really loop though . .
Thanks. I guess I needed to fix that. haha.
Sounded pretty awesome. The middle could have been a little nicer sounding instead of using the clashing sort of noise in the background, as the tune didn't really match with it. Also, at the end the percussion was too loud, it totally overpowered the music playing.
Thanks for the constructive review!
This song really just got out of control. You should have heard it un-EQed, haha now that was insane.
Didn't like it . . .
I found it to be a bit on the grating side. The main instrument was very loud, and there wasn't really any background music at all. The one part where there was a bit of a melody, it was all by itself with no percussion, which kind of took away from it.
If you make another song like this, add a bit more melody to make it more enjoyable to listen to.
If this is what this genre is supposed to sound like, then sorry for the low score, I just rate it on how much I enjoyed listening to it.
Oh, no, it no problem. The you way you stated out your thinking was very well told.
Thanks, and I promise to Excel, "Over my Potential" lol!
Thanks for the honest review. =D
It could have used more variation. I liked the ending, it was done well.
Thanks, glad you liked my favorite part:D.....6? you are hard person to impress though
Sounded amazing, made me think of some kind of demonic ritual or something like that. The only thing wrong was the ending, it was too abrupt. Other than that, it was excellent.
Nice sounding, but it could use some long notes or something in the background to give it a more complete sound.
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